I like it. A couple of less beans, maybe... There is a funky negative space thing going on between "A" and "F"...
I think the colors work. You might consider having "caffe" in a little snappier color to bring it out a touch.
nice work! Keep it up!
Have a great one!
-------------------- Bruce Bowers
DrCAS Custom Lettering and Design Saint Cloud, Minnesota
"Things work out best for the people who make the best of the way things work out." - Art Linkletter Posts: 6451 | From: Saint Cloud, Minnesota | Registered: Jun 1999
| IP: Logged |
posted May 28, 2003 11:02 PM
I like it too! Try the beans more in the middle area...and not so much at the edges. I really like it! nice job!
Posts: 3729 | From: Seattle | Registered: Sep 1999
| IP: Logged |
posted June 03, 2003 07:20 AM
Thanks for your comments and inputs. I'll be reworking on this one a bit...they just told me yesterday that they now want a neon. I'll keep this design and change the name for an otheer customer that actually sells coffe beans. will rework the A and get some of the beans out of there too! thanks again realy appreciate your comments.
É
-------------------- Élaine Beauchemin scrip Lettrage Scripsit inc. St-Hubert, Quebec, Canada www.scripsit.net Posts: 1096 | From: Saint-Hubert, Québec, Canada | Registered: Nov 1998
| IP: Logged |
Printer-friendly view of this topic