The Letterville BullBoard: Design Critique........anyone?

Letterville Bull Board Letterville | Bull Board

Front Page
A Letterhead History
About Us
Become A Resident
Edit Your Database Info
Find A Letterhead
Letterville Merchants
Resident Downloads
Letterville BookShop
Future Live Meets
Past Meets
Step-By-Steps
Past Panel Swaps
Past SOTM
Letterhead Profiles
Business Cards
Become A Merchant

Click on the button
below to chat with other
Letterville users.

Steve & Barb Shortreed
144 Hill St., E.
Fergus, ON, Canada
N1M 1G9

Phone: 519-787-2892
Fax: 519-787-2673
Email: barb@letterville.com

»	The Letterville BullBoard » The Portfolio Table » Design Critique........anyone?

UBBFriend: Email this page to someone!

Author

Topic: Design Critique........anyone?

John Martin Robson
Visitor
Member # 1686

posted

I don’t claim to be a designer in the conceptual sense, so any help would be appreciated.

I like the basic design, but feel as though it’s a bit empty, especially the bottom portion.

Any comments or suggestions?

quote:
if its not one thing.....it two things

--------------------
John Martin Robson
Pendragon Signs & Graphics
Yellowknife,NT,Canada

if it's not one thing.....it's two things

Posts: 261 | From: Yellowknife, NT, Canada | Registered: Aug 2000 | IP: Logged |

Brad Funk
Visitor
Member # 1351

posted

John, i would try moving the whole black area to the bottom. Or move down and enlarge. Put the address in the black line. And enlarge the name. Does it need to be this size? Possibly move the address in the black, and chop off the bottom. Instead of a straight line under "guest house" try a siloette(?) of land to match the trees.

Check your email.

[ December 28, 2001: Message edited by: AZBrad ]

--------------------
Brad Funk
Artisan Signs
Phoenix, AZ
www.artisan-signs.com

Posts: 291 | From: phoenix AZ | Registered: Feb 2000 | IP: Logged |

Brad Funk
Visitor
Member # 1351

posted