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This is a sign I'm doing for a non profit org in Oroville, CA.... Note, that the oval at the top will have a graphic of a food basket or something along that line.
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First thing I noticed is the "THE". Is it necesary or can you incorporate it in a different way, (maybe in a smaller oval)? With the balance of the size of the letters in "oroville" it makes it looks uncentered. I would also lose the blend on the banner on the bottem, hard to see dk blue? on the red on the ends. Just my two cents
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Why not put a basket on top??.....take away all the top frilly stuff. Make the OROVILLE a yellow outlined in red ....and yep the copy in the ribbon is hard to read.
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