posted June 15, 2001 01:48 PM
Well, here is another design I would like a critique on. I just did it up for a customer's magnetic signs. I designed the logo a while back, and wanted to do something that looked nice, not a typical white rectangle with the info on it. I like this, but am not totally happy with it. anyone have any ideas how to spruce it up or additional colors to use or anything at all? Thanks guys (and gals), I value your input highly!
------------------ Tyler Malinky
A Step Above Signs Cleveland, Ohio 440.479.8129 440.842.1894 fax
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posted June 15, 2001 04:23 PM
Welp...I tend to want to read the circle as an "O" in front of the "N". Instead of having the bird in FRONT of the N, try putting it ONTO the letter. The diagonal stroke is wide enough to accomodate it with a little adjustment....at least I think so....whatever you do, ya gotta lose the O thing going on there....I like the idea though, and the colors.....
Barry
------------------ Master's Touch Signs & Screenprinting Clinton AR 5017456246 ICQ 17430008 "Imagine the Possibilities..."
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posted June 15, 2001 10:34 PM
I like it too, but I would use a heavier font on the word construction and maybe slant it as the main copy. Also, the phone number has too much space between numbers. I would either kern it, and drop the size some, or use another font also. I really like the main copy, but agree with Barry on the circle. Maybe just move it over to the left some and drop the outline around it also. Good design though, and will look good on the truck I am sure.
------------------ John Deaton III Deaton Design 109 N. Cumberland Ave.,Harlan, Ky. 40831 606-573-9101
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