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Few months back I showed off a logo for my business that I never used...I liked it a lot, but it just never seemed to fit my business name.....which brings me to the card design you see below.
I was frustrated for a while...but I am pretty pleased with this new direction....a lot more in keeping with the design progression of my logo over the years...
[ May 21, 2009, 01:11 AM: Message edited by: Barry Branscum ]
1) The font used for "Designs, Signs & Screen Printing". I think it should be simpler. As it is, it seems to be competing with "Masters Touch" rather than complimenting it.
2) I don't like the position of the ampersand. It makes it read "Designs, Signs And And Screen Printing. (two ands)
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I like the card a lot but I think Glenn is right about Designs Signs & Screen Printing competing with Masters Touch. Try a simpler font like he suggest keeping the same color scheme. Love the colors.
-------------------- Dave Sherby "Sandman" SherWood Sign & Graphic Design Crystal Falls, MI 49920 906-875-6201 sherwoodsign@sbcglobal.net Posts: 5403 | From: Crystal Falls, MI USA | Registered: Apr 1999
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One more thing to think about . . . . DESIGNS SIGNS & SCREENPRINTING a little hard to say. Maybe SIGN DESIGNS & SCREENPRINTING
-------------------- John Arnott El Cajon CA 619 596-9989 signgraphics1@aol.com http://www.signgraphics1.com Posts: 1443 | From: El Cajon CA usa | Registered: Dec 1998
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I like the general look especially the masters touch ,my view is that as John pointed out it reads better as signs designs & screenprinting I would layout as signs, designs then the apersand underneath then screenprinting below that all the other info down to the phone number i would set in something less fancy and in pale blue for contrast good design though,its just my slant Terry
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