posted August 11, 2008 10:51 AM
OK. This is the first logo I'm putting up here for critique. Let me have it.
Developed for a child care facilty breaking free from a franchise. The customer asked for a circle and warm colors, but that's basically all the guidelines they gave. What do you think?
posted August 11, 2008 11:34 AM
I love the idea! Great work!
I'd perhaps flip the sun so it looks into the circle rather than away and have the rays in the circle centered on the sun rather than in the center of the circle. I'l also lose the square box around academy. If you need a faded border make an offset around the letters like Sun Child instead.
-grampa dan
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posted August 11, 2008 12:06 PM
The rays of the sun are already breaking out of the circular background, and I think it would look more dynamic if Sun Child were enlarged to break out as well. I wouldn't make the sun any bigger, just the lettering. The font for Academy seems too formal for this design. I would find something with more bounce to it, so it matches the feel of Sun Child better.
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posted August 11, 2008 01:55 PM
I like that one LOTS better. I'd like to see the panel behind Academy in navy, with white lettering. Love....Jill
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