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Hey looks great Tasmus, Now I'm being picky so take it for what it's worth. But to me the relationship of positve to negative space in the the word truth (rhythm)is thrown off by the gap in the U if you were to squeeze it a bit (keeping the stroke value the same) to cut down the space in the middle it would flow much better I like using ligature too especially with serif typestyles. but when you cut out all that negative space letters like O's and U's D's etc. stick out and draw the eye to those hot spots I feel they tend to look better if you minimize those hot spots. Like I said im being real picky in general I really like your design the colors either blue or the purple look great. and Maybe just maybe reduce the size of everything just a touch to frame your design with a little more negative space3 it will make it pop more and easier to read. My 2 pennys anyway. Looks very nice just the way it is to Eric
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