Ok first thing I see is way too busy, Cool look and feel but way to busy. The two areas that come to the front for me is the white masters touch, there is not enough contrast around each letter to make out clearly what it says, blur your eyes or look from across the room and you'll see what I mean. Second the lightning throught the word signs also creates shapes that aren't recognizable from a distance.
It is cool VERY cool but just not clearly readable.
-------------------- Bob Rochon Creative Signworks Millbury, MA 508-865-7330
"Life is Like an Echo, what you put out, comes back to you." Posts: 5149 | From: Millbury, Mass. U.S. | Registered: Nov 1998
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I agree, cool colors and strong shapes. Not enough negative space as the blur is creeping into what little is there. Patience, these thing evolve and work out over time.
-------------------- Alan Ackerson LetterWorks Design and Graphics alan@ack2.com Posts: 776 | From: Oak Ridge, NJ | Registered: Aug 2002
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Hey Barry.....make 'Masters Touch' smaller and DESIGNS bigger. And maybe the 'imagine the possiblities' in the same fun letterstyle as masters touch. Overall I really like it!!
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My take.... cool look, needs tweaking , how about a thin black outline on "masters touch" and make it a little smaller. Also change "image the possibilities" to a sans serif font (like avant guarde) now it's competing with "masters touch", maybe center this line, to me the design looks too heavy on the right side. Overall, this could evolve into a killer logo! Thanks for posting.
-------------------- Matthew Broadus Matthew Broadus Advertising Jacksonville, Fl. mattbroa@alltel.net Posts: 55 | From: Jacksonville, Florida, U.S.A. | Registered: Nov 1998
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