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After setting this one on the back burner for awhile, I'm at it again. Any suggestions would be appreciated. bear in mind that the image is uploaded at 72 dpi but all the small copy on the right one is still vector images so it will be alot sharper on the finished cards. The bottom one will be the back. Thanks for looking.
-------------------- Wayne Webb Webb Signworks Chipley, FL 850.638.9329 wayne@webbsignworks.com Posts: 7403 | From: Chipley,Florida,United States | Registered: Oct 1999
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1) Center all of the copy. 2) Keep the "2D & 3...." in white 3) Make the email address either in a pale blue or beige that matches the color used in "SignWorks".
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Too much copy - put the "2D, 3D etc." info on the back and maybe I'm being picky, but if you go with a vertical front, you should keep it vertical on back as well. That'll be 2 cents, please......
-------------------- www.signcreations.net Sonny Franks Lilburn, GA 770-923-9933 Posts: 4115 | From: Lilburn, GA USA | Registered: Feb 1999
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Looking at it now, I'd move the "Dimensional Signs / Visual Marketing Tools" so that it associates visually with the logo. Then I'd move the secondary copy up a bit, centering it between the "Visual Marketing Tools" and the email address. What you have now is something of a monotonous spacing where its too much the same from one thought to the next.
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as far as the vertical layout- I really don't like the "base" of the sign on the bottom edge like that- it doesn't look right and when they cut them down, more than likely you will lose part of that graphic-- a simple fix would be to but a bar of green at the bottom and then put the sign base on top of that...
add a 1/8th of an inch "safe" area all around or the trim could give you fits.
-------------------- Michael Clanton Clanton Graphics/ Blackberry 19 Studio 1933 Blackberry Conway AR 72034 501-505-6794 clantongraphics@yahoo.com Posts: 1735 | From: Conway Arkansas | Registered: Oct 2001
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I like a two sided card... logo and phone on one side.... laundry list on the other...
-------------------- Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass... It's about learning to dance in the rain ! Jim Moser Design 13342 C Grass Valley Ave. Grass Valley, Ca. 95945 530-273-7615 jwmoser@att.net Posts: 488 | From: Grass Valley, Ca. | Registered: May 2006
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I think you got your thousand words from the very nicely done logo on the front. The picture on the back says the very same words again, without adding anything.
The back would be put to better use by moving the list from the front, which also would clean up clutter and simplify the layout.
I'm not a fan of vertical cards. I think it would look better if you went horizontal with just you logo and website address, nothing else. Put all the rest of your information on the back with your phone number and of course your name.
I love your logo and it is really a show piece for your customers to look at when you hand them your card. they will flip it over to check out the rest out of curiosity. That's just my opinion, but I'm sure either way will still work.
Sign-cerely, Steve
-------------------- Steve Luck Sign Magic Inc. 2718-b Grovelin Godfrey, Illinois 62035 (618)466-9120 signmagic@sbcglobal.net Posts: 870 | From: 2718-b Grovelin Godfrey, Illinois 62035 | Registered: Dec 2004
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Thanks guys for all the great advice, I've been a little preoccupied with other things today. Going in the hospital for some tests tomorrow and hopefully I'll be back on it by Friday.
-------------------- Wayne Webb Webb Signworks Chipley, FL 850.638.9329 wayne@webbsignworks.com Posts: 7403 | From: Chipley,Florida,United States | Registered: Oct 1999
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Thanks for the prayers.
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