This is topic golf course logo in forum The Portfolio Table at The Letterville BullBoard.


To visit this topic, use this URL:
http://www.letterville.com/ubb/ultimatebb.php/topic/2/4158.html

---

Posted by Russ McMullin (Member # 5617) on :
 
Here is one I just got approved and finalized:



Comments and critiques welcome.
 

---

Posted by Mark Stokes (Member # 5351) on :
 
like it , maybe the script needs to be a fraction heavier
 

---

Posted by Sam Staffan (Member # 4552) on :
 
I like that Russ. Nice choice on fonts
 

---

Posted by Russ McMullin (Member # 5617) on :
 
Mark, is this better? I think are right about it needing more weight.


 

---

Posted by Vance Galliher (Member # 581) on :
 
..I really like that Russ
 

---

Posted by Russ McMullin (Member # 5617) on :
 
Thanks Vance, Sam, and Mark for the feedback.
 

---

Posted by Jillbeans (Member # 1912) on :
 
Don't hate me.
But the double hill in the background reminds me of a bum. I would eliminate one hill.
Normally I would balk at script on an arch but this gives it a friendly retro feel.

Would like to see it with the guy/hill and the subcopy the same color.
Love....Jill
 

---

Posted by Sam Staffan (Member # 4552) on :
 

quote:

---

Originally posted by Jillbeans:
Don't hate me.
But the double hill in the background reminds me of a bum.
Love....Jill

---

In what position?

You have to look at it as "Grass" not "#ss".
 

---

Posted by Dana Blair (Member # 951) on :
 
Must be just how Jill's mind works. When looking at something about golf, she's thinking of ......................

[ June 16, 2009, 11:18 PM: Message edited by: Dana Blair ]
 

---

Posted by Craig Sjoquist (Member # 4684) on :
 
well I tend to agree with jill ... a second look and could be ppl chuckling

then again it's a golf course, a little thought may work in it's favor

maybe shorten one of the lines
 

---

Posted by Neil D. Butler (Member # 661) on :
 
Geeze I thought it looked great as it was until Jill pointed out the dirty overtones it may suggest, here's what I would do with it.

[/IMG]
 

---

Posted by Dan Beach (Member # 9850) on :
 
Haha, good one Neil.
 

---

Posted by Cam Bortz (Member # 55) on :
 
I like Russ's second version with the slightly heavier script. I'm a little bothered by the gray for "golf and country club" - try that in the green used for the bum, er, the hills.
 

---

Posted by Jillbeans (Member # 1912) on :
 
What about eliminating the hills and making the subcopy in green?
Neil...tsk tsk tsk

PS
Oh Nooooo now I am seeing it as "skidmark"
I think I need shot.

[ June 17, 2009, 12:12 PM: Message edited by: Jillbeans ]
 

---

Posted by Todd Gill (Member # 2569) on :
 
I gotta admit - I saw the sexy curvature of a derriere as well...but that just makes a fellow want to go swing a club there that much more.

Another satisfied customer - good job Russ.
 

---

UBB.classic™ 6.7.2