This one just screemed for a characture. I found out after I designed it that the guys intended it to be that way and purposely left out "&" so that they could use a "savage swan" as their logo! I left the hammer and stuff simple so that it can easily be cut in vinyl.
Posted by Dave Sherby (Member # 698) on :
Nice Dave. The only thing that bugs me is the size of the "O"s in construction. The first "O" makes the "C" look so small even though it's the same size as the second "C". I have a font that does the same thing. Try tweeking the "O"s to see if it looks better. The theme and overall look is cool.
Posted by Dave Utter (Member # 634) on :
I agree Dave. I hadn't even noticed that. The letters are raw right out of the font. I'll fix it. Thanks!
Posted by Dave Utter (Member # 634) on :
there.
actually I might have done that by mistake come to think of it.................
edited because I put up the same freaking picture
[ February 26, 2007, 08:21 PM: Message edited by: Dave Utter ]
Posted by Dave Sherby (Member # 698) on :
Much better. Nice job Dave.
Posted by Sam Staffan (Member # 4552) on :
Love It! I think it is very clever, and real attention getter.
Love the look on that Swans face!
[ February 27, 2007, 02:26 PM: Message edited by: Sam Staffan ]
Posted by Miles Cullinane (Member # 980) on :
Can I suggest one other thing, The eye of the swan could be a little bigger and perhaps more cartoonish than real.
Nice look overall
Posted by John Deaton (Member # 925) on :
I like it Dave! I like the way you put the bolt in the word construction also. Only thing I might do different is to humanize the swan just a little. Give him arms, so he can hold the hammer and drive a nail in one of the letters. And what Miles said also. Posted by Bruce & Deb Newton (Member # 2312) on :
Dave,
Not sure about the shadow, it looks like a cast shadow starting from the middle of the body? Shouldn't the legs be included?
Bruce
Posted by Dusty Campbell (Member # 4601) on :
Now tighten up the kerning on "con" to match the rest of the word.
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I left the hammer and stuff simple so that it can easily be cut in vinyl.
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