OK, let me have it!!! critique til' your hearts content. this is the first thing of mine I've actually posted here, but don't be shy. Really tell me what ya think. This is all cutable and will go on a semi of similar blue. http://www.casscomm.com/~utter/goodwinlogo.jpg Posted by bronzeo (Member # 1408) on :
I think it looks good. One thing I would change is to arrange the wheatstalk in a manner that lets the G read easier, especially for a moving truck. Maybe thinning or smalling it slightly would help. The overall and compo looks good to me. Bronzeo
Posted by Jerry Steward (Member # 2420) on :
OK Utter, First drop the circle around the G. Cut the wheat off where it tucks behind the G, reduce the wheat in height, but keep the width a little. Now tighten up the space between the farm lettering until the black outlines are about touching. Reduce the line space until the F is overlapping the O's equally. The size of the G could be increased to drop below the baseline of oodwin to help with centering the farm. If this is all utterly confusin', just scrap this post and sell the job. You've done pretty good already!
Posted by cheryl nordby (Member # 1100) on :
Yep....lower the wheat, stretch out the top copy then tighten the bottom copy. Make the inner part of the circle around the G a different color, possibly a forest green. Nice choice for colors.....looks good!
sorry so big..and sorry about the wheat just another idea.
[ February 06, 2002: Message edited by: cheryl nordby ]
Posted by John Lennig (Member # 2455) on :
Yeah Cheryl, that's looking real good. Name out front , farms receeding some, and location further "back" That design trick using different style or size first letter can leave it looking oodwin farms.
John / Big Top
Posted by Doug Allan (Member # 2247) on :
Here's a change I thought of trying out. I felt that some overlapping elements could work & a larger "G". I also wanted to kern "Farms" but didn't try to do it. Maybe a more scripty font? Posted by utter (Member # 634) on :
That's looking better but I still have a hard time making out the "G"
Posted by Steve Barba (Member # 431) on :
Maybe a fatter "G", different font that fits with what ya got.
Posted by utter (Member # 634) on :
You may be on to something Steve. The different font on the G. or maybe "oodwin" needs to be different. The customer originally wanted a "frilly" or "decorative" G. I really didn't think that would work either. I suppose he was thinking like you would see on a crest or something.........thanks
