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Posted by Checkers (Member # 63) on :
 
Hiya Heads,
The sh*t has really hit the fan at work & my bosses sold the business.
I'm not too concerned about my position, but I want to be ready, just in case...

http://members.home.net/sign-it/resume.html

This link is to my resume, sorta. I'm thinking of printing a few on an Edge & mounting to black pvc. Then I was going to mail them to perspective employers.
Any coments would be appreciated.
Havin' fun,
Checkers

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Posted by Glenn Taylor (Member # 162) on :
 
Hi Brian,

I think you've got a good start. The only thing I might do a little differently is .....

1) Add a shadow to your name
2) Change the font on the secondary copy to something more serious. Dom Casual is just a little too cartoony for the logo and headline styles you used.

IMHO

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Posted by John Deaton (Member # 925) on :
 
I don't know, at first glance, I was worried about the chosen font too, but the more I look at it, I think it looks great! I would possibly change the very top line of copy to maybe microgramma light, but the rest I think I would leave as is. Good choice of colors too, and I like the layout.

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Posted by VICTORGEORGIOU (Member # 474) on :
 
I think the casual style looks just fine against your logo. Personally I am tired of Dom, so I would go with comic sans which does not look comic-ey at all when printed in small point sizes - see boblovessigns.com for comic sans. Other alternates are Technical, and some others. Good luck to you! Vic G

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Posted by Checkers (Member # 63) on :
 
Thanks for the replies guys!
The look I'm trying to achieve is similar to a casual show card. So I want it to look a little loose while trying to maintain a somewhat professional style(if that makes sense).
I'm definitely adding the shadow to my name.
Tried comic sans & it just didn't fit well with the current layout & I'm feeling too lazy to revise it.
Unfortunately, I don't have microgramma or eurostyle light loaded on this pc.
Now comes the fun part ):
updating my web site with the rest of my info & a portfolio.
Havin' fun,
Checkers

BTW,did it take long for the web page take to load?

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Posted by Mark Fair Signs (Member # 289) on :
 
hey brian,
i agree with john.
choose a typeface with a thinner stroke for the sub copy.(maybe futura book?)or if ya want to give it a flair try signdna's mike steven's font... "stix dna"
http://www.signdna.com

if you are trying to achieve
a "showcard look "
be generous with "negative space"

reduce the size of the image at least 25 % or more for the web resume.

good ideas,

keep up the great work!


mark

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Posted by Dave Ginley (Member # 1723) on :
 
Hi Brian..whats going on in H-burg? Yours is the third resume I've come across in the last few weeks...two of them were mailed to me...one was from York but I know the person she was working for and he also had an outlet in H-burg...

Dave

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Posted by cheryl nordby (Member # 1100) on :
 
Hiya Brian. I like it! The orange letters are a little hard to read (under 'experienced with') but I like the overall design.

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